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All Comments on 'The Jones "Triplets"'

by UnknownPotential

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RfoxRfdRfoxRfdover 8 years ago
No, no, no, no smh

Why degrad yourself with broken, ignorant English you can definetly use slang but when it's so horribly done just STOP!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
RfoxRfd

I believe that is Creole, a pidgin language, and not "broken, ignorant English" as you put it. The only ignorant thing here if you.

UP, great story so far. I am look forward to more.

PS. I have masters degree in Modern Languages so I know my shit.

UnknownPotentialUnknownPotentialover 8 years agoAuthor
RfoxRfd

It's patois, because as stated in the story they are of Jamaican descent. It only happened (heavily) in the first chapter, because of people like you not understanding it.

SexyVixen96SexyVixen96over 8 years ago
I love this story

I love this story personally. If other people have a problem with the way he write stop reading .

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When are we going to get more of this wonderful story.

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