All Comments on 'The Journey'

A bit short, but a good story.

I thought this was a very good story. I would love to read more of this couple.

a good build up to the sex - but then rushed the actual getting together

needed more.

rushed from meeting to sex. Even the sex seemes rushed

will look for more from you

Great job. I hope you continue the journey and delve into this new horizon more in depth. you are on to something wonderful. please continue