All Comments on 'The Journey Ch. 01'

Very erotic and easily arousing. Looking for chapter 2 already!

Well written, lovely slow build up, can hardly wait for chapter 2

You might want to spend a paragraph describing your two characters. Mother is obviously well-endowed, but tall, short, full-figured or slim? Her clothing also helps to capture the imagination of the reader (this one, anyhow). Keep going!

Since all of the back ground has been laid, I hope the next chapter will be mostly hot sex between mom and son. I want to read that he fucks her ragged, and she loves every minute of how he treats her. Thanks

please continue!!!

I hope you will continue with this story, it is fantastic. I hope you will post chapter 2 soon.

There are plenty of boys like Alex. They're "young, hung, and full of cum," and they've got a very special interest in their own mother's cunt. They've got a big stiff prick, a pair of balls they need to unload all the time, and they know the perfect place to unload their young balls. It's up their own mother's incomparable twat. That's where a boy's creamy sperm belongs.

Look forward to part 2.