All Comments on 'The Journey Ch. 02'

by bhuff

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I wish you wrote down the details of how Kate used her big boobs and twerking skills to make her man happy over and over again... Maybe in the sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Enjoyable read bhuff as you continue to unfurl this lovely rose named Amber. She certainly has learned much thanks to the dutiful attentions of the seasoned Coach Tutors and wizened Guest Tutors, alpha males one and all. Even her classmates have assisted and Amber still has an entire year to go.

Kate was an interesting and pleasant distraction as well but the highlight of this Chapter has to be the images planted in the reader's mind regarding the various activities and festivities of all participants that never fail to entertain and always cause one to ask for more.

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