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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
inconclusive

This story has been left unfinished. It needs to be completed, as Miss Jane has indicated at the end of this chapter. The climax of the all too brief love scene needs to be enhanced, and this entire store really should have been placed in the Romance category.

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