All Comments on 'The Journey Pt. 02'

by MissYellowPanties

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300bowler300300bowler300almost 7 years ago
WONDERFUL

PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY, I AM LOVING EVERY WORD OF IT...YOU KEEP YOUR READER INTO THE STORY, THINKING IT'S THEM RECEIVING THE LESSONS...THANK YOU BETTY jo XOXO

jenncdsubjenncdsubalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful

You're a really good writer! Jamie's comment at the end of Chrissie's night was a perfect erotic surprise...just the right touch of humiliation for Josie, while still emphasizing her emotional connection with her friend.

The "school for girls" theme has been done to death, but still you find new ideas. (Or at least they're new to me <giggle>!)

Thanks for putting so much work into writing these. I see you posted one more chapter today...with luck, I'll have time to read it later tonight.

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