by lacecorset
I enjoyed this work immensely. It is so vivid, it seems as if these scenes were lifted from the author's personal experiences. If so, we should all have the joy of instant messaging with Lacecorset.
It'd be interesting to hear what you could do with a more complicated plot, but I'm certainly not going to penalize for that since that's not the type of story you were writing. The details there are great.
Reminds me of an instant message flirtation I had out at college. Flirting with someone who lived a couple minutes away, I think we both got so worked up we could have come in about five seconds, but she had to meet someone so the rendezvous got moved to later that night (amazingly intense).