by MrMikelobe1952
Mike... another great read. Thanks for linking me to it. I enjoyed the build up and would have loved to seen the level of play go higher. Yummy.
It was very well written and the quality of the write was great. Easy to read and follow.
Excellent.
RedHairedandFriendly
Nice work MrMike, just the right measure and pace. I guess I need to check some more of your work out now! :)
WOW! I enjoyed(myself)reading that. Very seductive. Great build up.
thanks! ;)
Very well written and erotic ... love the literate quality of it. I would have loved to have been in that room. I certainly wouldn't have stopped with the finger.
Francypants
I loved it. Was getting myself off just reading it. Would like more stories like that.