All Comments on 'The Kane Family Chronicles Ch. 02'

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MrKittyLuverMrKittyLuverover 6 years agoAuthor
Caught an error...

Re-reading this since publication and noticed a minor continuity mistake. I failed to mention him pulling her underwear to the side when going down on her. Those responsible have been sacked. Management would like to apologize for the inconvenience.

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