by kwchancellor
I like the secret relationship. I know guys like Jake. Great experiences.
I like, I like! Glad you wrote another chapter. I was sad, but also glad about the ending. Not every relationship has a HEA.
I have received enough feedback about ending my stories without a happy ending to know that I can't get away with how this one SHOULD end. Part three is pending- with a happy ending.
you took the easy way of ending this story which should have at least 5 chapters .it was love he felt from jake and they could have worked on building something together , but you got lazy and ended the story . sad.
.... Because that's the only thing he could attract, except maybe Eric again if he's foolish enough to let that happen.
I suppose this all falls into the Alpha Male Role! Jake is obviously very confused about his own sexuality! He is definitely not totally straight!!! The women is likely him trying to prove to himself that he is after being with Eric again and obviously enjoying himself! But he's not Gay!!!!