All Comments on 'The Killer'

needs expertise, luck and drama. TK U MLJ LV NV

Thanx tazz. will definately keep this in mind while writing the next one :)

I would take some time and really listen to how people speak. The dialog seems.... stiff. I had a really difficult time visualizing the scene. Now that could just be because I've only got one cup of coffee in me. :) The one thing that caught my eye was starting a couple of sentances with "and". Overall I liked it, it just needs a bit of tightening up and smoothing out, but it's a good start.

@SSS - thanx for the comments. will keep this in mind while writing the next one :)