All Comments on 'The Kind Stranger'

Nice story, but what is wrong with sex between cousins? It certainly doesn't count as incest in the UK, where it is quite legal for cousins to marry and I know several couples who are related in that way.

Fantastic story. Keep it going.

Liked your story - but only thing that brought me to a halt was "drug" Always makes me want to scream - just as bad as "dove" Past tense of these is "dragged" and "dived"

But, keep it up, please.

You could use a proofreader. Otherwise, a pretty good tale.

cousins can marry in almost all state in america also.

they need to stay together she could transfer to a college near where he lives and live with him.

A well developed storyline and very believable characters. A very erotic sex scene and sweet sex between the lovers.

An enjoyable read, thanks.

I appreciate the words of encouragement as this is my first story. I have been working on the next step in the story and hope to finish it soon.

Wow! I really enjoyed this story. please continue it

Hope there is more to your story!!! Thanks.

looking forward to chapter 2

I hope you develope the relationship as well as the sexual connection. I get tired of the threesoms, foursomes and moresomes. I much prefer a loving commited relationship with a "happily ever after" ending

For you first story your good i been reading for about 5 years now and hey you potential.hey make a part 2 i love this to become a series.mabe he gets his aunt and mother im just saying--BG

nice slow buildup and then great sex at the end, with a wonderful hook for future chapters. well done!

can't wait for ch.2

This adventure is complete , don't spoil it by bringing in aunts or sisters or mothers etc ; you are capable of many more good tales . Keep them coming .

I like it not over the top could see it happen.. good work

Great story. It should really be rated much higher.

Nice love scene, great ending.

needs more chapters

Good story, although I don't care for the narrated style, and you need an editor. Dropped you from a five, more please.

Please find a good proof reader.

This would have been a 5 but for the errors.

Haven’t posted any new, although I have written plenty. Perhaps I’m still a bit gun shy after all the negative feedback. If anyone would like to be my proofreader, message me.

Vincent