All Comments on 'The Kingdom Ch. 07'

I hope she finds a way to read the rule book and overpower her girl. She needs not to be a slave. And who is Brandy? And what was in Annabelle’s email?

At some point, she's got to learn to stop assuming she knows what's going on & do some research, instead of just charging forward like a bull in a china shop. Naïveté has gotten her into one mess after another, while luck has gotten her back out. Too bad Brandy didn't leave her some reading material (hello, the rule book?). At least she'll get a chance to catch up on the sleep she missed while studying the night before.

Brandy must be an undercover agent, tasked with taking down "The Kingdom" and needs to make contact with her backup. Once she's done that I suspect she'll return to join forces with our trussed heroine. I wonder if Brandy will pretend to be the slave again since she knows how. "Jodi" wouldn't have a clue but can fake ownership with coaching from Brandy. Together, they'll be a great team.

Thanks for the feedback! Nthusiastic- your comment from the last chapter was great as well and prompted me to edit each chapter to include titles. So thanks for that :)

The reason you haven’t seen the protagonist’s temperament soften yet is simple. This is only her third day at the kingdom. She’s got 3 full months. And up til now, her instincts (and luck) have served her pretty well. Continued success just isn’t a strong motivator for change. It’s not until disaster strikes that people realize their need for pragmatism.

The levelheadedness you’re looking for is coming. But given the protagonist’s personality and past, there just has to be the right motivation for it... I think she’ll find the next two chapters quite sobering ;)

I noticed & appreciated the change, southrook. Makes it much easier to find the favorite chapters to reread.

You spoiled us, with the first six chapters posting so close together. It's been over three weeks since the last. Not that I'm complaining, mind you; after all you can't rush perfection. Still ... (We're waiting ... 💤)

Saw that turnabout coming, she's been behaving like an lazy, impetuous idiot this whole time, she deserves it. Lazy, impetuous, and stupid.

However would she really have been THAT stupid, as to take the collar off?

I know she’s new to the process and the rules of this whole thing but she saw just how ruthless they were in the woods. Nobody would be that fucking stupid. To be honest it actually made me feel nauseous, because whilst literally everyone else has signed up and know what to expect, she hasn’t. It doesn’t matter that she’s signed some papers, it wasn’t in her name.

Naturally it raises questions, is Brandy undercover and for who?

The MOST important factor has to be a safe word, there MUST be a way for a slave to safeword away from an activity AND from an owner, even if it does me a forfeiting some or all of their payment. In her place you can bet your fucking ass that I would do something to attract security to get out.