by Esha
This story really made me think about some stuff. I loved the writing style. I actually had tears in my eyes, I didn't expect that. This is a really good story. Thanks.
Esha: stunningly beautiful story. There is something real about this story, isnt it?
You did a great job of giving the characters depth without going into too much detail, and the alternating point of view works really well.
Sad at 3 levels, sad about his life, sad about his partners death and sad about the wife's and the publics reaction to his last moments with his partner,