All Comments on 'The Ladder'

by Nils Huim

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happymuffinhappymuffinover 6 years ago
Okay but

Its a cool Story, I like that the daughter is 25 and not always 18 or 19.

And I enjoy the cheating on her fiancé with her dad in the next Tent even if it just was a hand job.

What I really didn't like was that they had already fucked it would have been much sweeter ( not cute I mean for the readers ) if that would have been their first encounter

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Nice story

Daughter loves her father. How long have they been lovers?

Dad has devoted his life to her.

Can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Very good

I liked everything about this story, and that includes the way you tell it. Very good, clever, skillful, and you seem to like trying to control how the reader reads. I like that. You are taking this seriously.

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