by Nils Huim
Its a cool Story, I like that the daughter is 25 and not always 18 or 19.
And I enjoy the cheating on her fiancé with her dad in the next Tent even if it just was a hand job.
What I really didn't like was that they had already fucked it would have been much sweeter ( not cute I mean for the readers ) if that would have been their first encounter
Daughter loves her father. How long have they been lovers?
Dad has devoted his life to her.
Can't wait for the next chapter
I liked everything about this story, and that includes the way you tell it. Very good, clever, skillful, and you seem to like trying to control how the reader reads. I like that. You are taking this seriously.