by karabryn
This has been a great storyline, looking forward to the next chapter.-Mark
This series is great--literate, interesting, believable, and with correct spelling, grammar and punctuation, which should all be givens, but unfortunately are fairly uncommon. Would love to see the next installment.
I love it. The build up, the tease and the ending was breath taking. Please continue this series. I'm dying to know what happens next.
This is one of the best stories I've read. Please, if you are still around: continue.
Quite the most erotic part yet of one of the best stories I have read. xx
I really like your writing style. I've found Brits generally have a better command of the language than Americans do (I am one of the latter), and you are a case in point. Yes, there are some idiomatic differences between British English and American English that don't seem natural to me, but that doesn't get in the way of recognizing your word-crafting skill. There are a few editing issues in your stories where a word was inadvertently inserted or omitted, and I had to reread a paragraph to make sure I understood it properly, but I won't complain loudly. My only real complaint: I didn't want the stories to end. I'm about two-thirds of the way through reading them all, but I will most definitely finish. Enjoyable and erotic reading. Thank you for sharing your writing talent on Literotica.
I loved this series of stories! Please write a follow-up so I can find out what happened to Victoria!
Excellent , still waiting for next chapter , things she has to do on way to party or when there while she watches camilla work
Yes please another few chapters, next Victoria being put through some tests to see how serious she wants it ,
stripper , naked waitress etc. then finally goes on a job with camilla just to strip and entertain while Victoria goes into other room.