All Comments on 'The Lady Mayoress's Daughter'

The young lady getting her thrills from teasing worked well, I thought. It could progress further and be a quite interesting story.

I thought it was generally well written, although "He satisfied her needs, and her his." grated somewhat.

Lue

Looking forward to next chapter and hopefully him asking a few more ladies what colour knickers they are wearing.

Is there any more to follow? Well done -- five stars.

Great storyline and having attended similar events in my opinion very believable - hope there's more to cum.

...caught.

Thanks.

Zach.

brilliant story - hope there is more to come

Excellent - and a great picture to go with it!

Absolutely brilliant!

I enjoyed reading this very well-crafted story.

Looking forward to more of your writing.

Superb pieced of writing with lots of detail that adds to the story and makes it real, and I like the way the ending leaves the reader wanting more