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Click hereSo there I was in a bikini, in the sun, with the thought that if I didn't hurry I would get few tan lines. Now with a handful of baby oil I was laying there pumping my cock. She would occasionally stop me to extend it. But finally at the edge of orgasm, she ripped off the blindfold. She was there videotaping. I was so close I couldn't stop. I pumped to completion. Exhausted.
Jenny was laughing. But as I gained my senses I looked around. We were on the opposite side of the yard to where my house was. My eyes slowly worked there way up to the neighbor's window.
Oh my god.....there was a lady up there. She had a disgusted look on her face. She was standing there with her hands on her hips. I quickly covered up.
Jenny stopped filming and looked over her shoulder. Oh Shit.......that is Mrs. Smith and she can be real trouble. You better run over and see her immediately.......No I wouldn't take the time to change. You can wrap the towel around you. She giggled. Oh yeah and pull up your panties....
Interesting character dynamics, some fun sex scenes, but amateurish writing (most times there are no divide between narrative text and speech, making it a tad confusing to follow). Since this was posted like 5 years ago, I'm assuming you've had time to better your craft. I'd love to read some new stuff from you, you've got potential for hot stories!
Great story hope you have more in store for these characters
This was a very erotic story. As the other reviews said, the writing was a little rough. I would really enjoy reading about where this relationship goes to.
Thank you for writing and posting here.