All Comments on 'The Lady's Wish'

Deep rich language and a lovely scenario.

I was quite entranced with the main character's emotions and how fully they were evoked.

Well done.

You have no reason to blush from your first entry. Your writing skills and descriptive phrases were very pleasing and erotic. Excellent story. I'll look forward to seeing more of your fantasies and desires turned into such wonderfully descriptive writing.

- Ron -

You are an excellent writer. Keep them coming sister. I will look forward to reading them.

This a wonderful little story! I enjoyed the original way you let them break free from the good girl/hero archetypes without having to turn it into something seedy. This was a sexy, fun read! ~Thanks for sharing your story!