All Comments on 'The Lancaster Men'

I was starting to dispair, thought I'd read myself frigid.

That I'd already read the best stories and I was stuck with what I refer to as hump em/ pump em's. Being a story termite (500 page paperback is light reading), those type of stories are as interesting as watching paint dry.

Then I discovered this little gem. Just thinking of what you could do with a fuller story line get me hot.

Keep on writing!

FOR ALL WOMEN/MOMS LIKE MYSELF..SUPER SEX-CHARGED..TOTALLY UNINHIBITED..AND WITH MY OWN "TRENT/STEVEN"...STUDS.. NOTHING BIGGER TURN-ON THAN WATCHING AND BEING A PART OF THEIR TOTAL ALL OUT BI FAMILY ACTION..YOUR OVER-THE TOP "DIRTY TALK" WAS MAJOR SIZZLE..AND SO OFTEN LACKS IN OTHERS ATTEMPTS TO DO WHAT YOU DEFINETLY DID..HOPE YOU RAMP UP YOUR NEXT CHAPTERS EVEN MORE..INCLUDING PHYSICAL DESCRIPTIONS OF THESE STUDS..AND MAYBE EVEN SOME TOTALLY HOT WS...WE ARE WAITING..

I like that.

I think the story is decent as far as the others I have read, and I will check out others in the future. I can honestly say I only have one issue with the story, but it is a matter of preference as opposed to an issue with the writing or story. Please don't take the rest of my comment as being critical of your writing because that isn't the case.

I guess I'm just not into it when they start calling it a pussy or cunt, because that always ruins it for me. I have been of the mind that if I wanted to read about someone getting their pussy pounded I would not be reading the gay male stories section. That is something I'd prefer to be left out of any gay male story, but I didn't write it so I have no say. That being said, I am pleading with you to write at least one story with it being called an ass instead of a pussy or cunt. That would thrill me in huge ways. As a straight woman, I have no clue what excites me so much about gay men having anal sex but it does.

Thank you