All Comments on 'The Land Lady'

by bluefox07

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
not bad----but

The story wasn't bad but lacked the "HEAT" like the stories "Naughty High Class Mom" part 1&2

photon100photon100over 17 years ago
Grinded?

Surely you don't think this is a real word...... the rest of the story is OK though.....

bluefox07bluefox07about 17 years agoAuthor
Actually...

I admit, I used an urbanized term, but according to the online dictionary:

Grinded

\Grind"ed\, obs. p. p. of Grind. Ground.

So yes, I believe it is a real word, but are there better words out there? Yes. I just chose to use that one. Cheers!

steamyseductresssteamyseductressover 14 years ago
Very good story, but needs a little more depth

Hey Anonymous in usa! You're an idiot!!!! this story was very good, my only complaint being the sex was slightly, just slightly rushed after a steamy buildup. bluefox07, if you take your time some more, drawing out the intercourse, like you do the seduction process, your stories will be perfect. don't listen to morons like Anonymous in usa who say (repeatedly) that your stories lack heat, because they don't.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Not going to lie,

My favorite erotic stories are MILF's getting sex from younger men.

When I was younger, I did dream about being a stud and secretly doing it with one of my middle school teachers.

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Plot twist: Joy did get pregnant

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