All Comments on 'The Landlord'

To me, this among the best pieces of writing I have encountered. The story is very hot and the description of her mental process is superb. The brain is the most important sex organ, and I felt a relationship with both parties.

"Ya dun good", as I used to tell my students!

This story opened with fear over her rent and was so well written how it unfolded and the thought process she went through. It also ended with her being comfortable laying on his shoulder but fearing again what she got herself into. Truly a switch from what is often on here and refreshing.

This piece I feel flowed beautifully. It was descriptive and allowed your imagination to take over. To someone with no experience in this realm such as myself, made Nikki's thoughts and feelings vindicated. What she felt was not wrong ,but she had a man ( Sir)help guide her. Well done!

Beautifully written. Thank you for shearing.

really enjoyed this believable piece of writing looking forward to the next installment .

Very nice to read a domination story with a warmth and sweetness to it. It made it so much more appealing, and also more believable within its premises.

I had skipped this story. The title and description sounded like countless cliché filled piles about fat, sweaty, nasty old creeps doing a checklist of nauseating things to a non consenting tenant.

I was wrong and I thank the others who commented for bringing me back to look at it. You have put an awful lot of story in two pages. Strong characterization, solid plot and scorchingly hot sex. Well done. I adore loving d/s and b/d without the hard edgy s/m and humiliation. You delivered a wonderful serving of that.

More, please...

This reminds me of the kind of D/s my Master/Husband and I participate in. I fell in love with BDSM because of the strong emotions, the helplessness, the strength each partner needs to give, as well as let go, for one another. Your story showed how a Master can, and does, truly love their submissive.