All Comments on 'The Landlord's Protégé Pt. 03'

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rightbank over 7 years ago

too complicated

too convoluted

and too contradictory within the storyline.

The behaviour of Angela and Victor coupled with the admonition to go slow as her first love comes back into her life is as silly as Suzy, Seth, and Claire.

swedishreader1 over 6 years ago

Really good.

Definitely no too complicated or convoluted as the last comment suggested....... not for adults at least

Horseman68 about 5 years ago

Great As Always.

Another great story. Reading on.

EVLover over 1 year ago

😁

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