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UberShortyChick327UberShortyChick327over 8 years ago
good start!

this was a cute start and i like the story line quite a bit! But the writing is a tad hard to read in terms of its flow, you might want to revise it so it's a bit more appealing to the ear of the mind. otherwise its great! keep going with it!

-lulu

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