All Comments on 'The Last Christmas in the Near Myth'

I wanted to like it, I really did. It caught me but then lost me. Maybe I needed something a bit more arousing. Keep writing though, there is something there that I do like.

May your Christmas be naughty ;-)

Jenna

Jenna

I appreciate the comment. If you read this can you say where you felt the story started to lose you.? Thanks.

cvillerook

A very compelling take on the interweaving of legends. I remember an old Thor comic with the same Santa/Odin juxtaposition and could see the same in the Krampus being a allegory for Lilith. The sex was well-written but hardly the centerpiece of the story... And that's not a complaint.

Thank you