All Comments on 'The Last of the White Tigers Ch. 04'

i am hoping that there will be more coming soon. this is a wonderful read.

Very nice keep up the good work although this chapter seemed to go way to fast I hope the following chapter gets her just as fast :)

A really creative story, thank you.

But, get an editor!!! Grammar and Tense could be refined.... although I don't want to sound like an English teacher. lol!

I am totally loving the story you are weaving, and can't wait for the next exciting instalment! Thanks x

Please keep writing!!! The length of this one is much better keep it up.

Interesting story. I like it.

Then your on fucking drugs. The tense is all up the clacker, and the whole thing feels like it has been written by a thirteen year old child. It's lucky that this story hasn't been submitted on paper, because I wouldn't even use it for toilet paper!!!

tbh the idea behind the story is decent but its execution is that of a 4 year old child, this could have been an amazing story but instead it is barely tolerable