All Comments on 'The Last Princess of Lorrea Ch. 16'

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Ellienora35Ellienora35almost 10 years ago
Beautiful

Such a beautiful scene. Sigh.

Buxombeauty2Buxombeauty2almost 10 years ago
Finally!

Lovebirds have finally connected ... literally.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Well done!

I liked that Elena had some problem because of what had happened earlier,and that Henry was sensitive enough to understand and find a solution--one mutually pleasurable.

inspector123inspector123almost 10 years ago
Worth the wait .....

The sex scene was very well done. Glad that Henry was able to guide Elena past the Caspian's problem.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Beautifully written :-) And loved that Elena finally felt safe in the arms of the man who loves her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Better name it as love story.

getthebookgetthebookalmost 10 years ago
thank you thank you thank you

Well worth the wait.

Happy to see issues addressed. Like the way it was overcome. Glad Henry understood that it was not just her but her culture too, taking it not only slow but with kind instructions.

Hope another chapter in already in the works. There is still so much more for the two of them, including ruling a kingdom.

Eve86Eve86over 9 years ago
Yay!

I can't wait to see what else Henry shows her about the marital bed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Bravo!

This is the best one I've read for a while! However I would like to have an estimate when the new chapter is coming out if possible. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
awsome

Oh my god its awsome story,

I cant wait for the nex chapter

dont take more time to submitt next chaper

long_legs2ulong_legs2uover 9 years agoAuthor
Phew!

I'm glad that you all enjoyed the chapter and thought it well worth the wait... yay!

Now, I know that you're all itching for the next chapter, but I'm giving you guys a heads up on this one, it'll be a while. I have a crazy month ahead of me and well, I have a job (shift work) that doesn't leave me with much down time... what else? oh, and I'm lazy :)

But don't worry, I'm just about to start it, got my google doc open with a new chapter heading as we speak.

Patience is a virtue... and a Take That song.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
my my.....

I have written before too...

Hav had a bad experience in the past...and then found a person who is very endearing.....though was very scared but on his birthday we made love....i love him.....n your stories....its as if in d middle of reading it i found him...n he is so much like henry.........u r lucky for me.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
waiting......

Its been ages since u.put up d last part!do u actually plan to post another one? :'(

magevmagevover 9 years ago
More, please?

I have loved this story, won't you please continue it?

long_legs2ulong_legs2uover 9 years agoAuthor
don't worry, i'm not finished yet.

I've got a lot going on in my life at the moment which leaves me no time to write... But I promise, dear readers, that I haven't abandoned the story. I just need time, inspiration and a good bubble bath.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
continuation?

Are you still going to continue this story?? It would be a shame if you never finish it :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Was disappointed, Elena seems like too much work to me. The whole story lead to Henry getting some to the point where I think even I got blue balls then the sex was lame and limited :(

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
hurry

please continue we are waiting for next.chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Before the end...

Elena needs to say 'I love you' to Henry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Holding Out Hope

I've been following your story since the beginning and your characters deserve a great ending. Please don't let this story end here!

long_legs2ulong_legs2ualmost 9 years agoAuthor
Still working in it!

I'm sorry for the delay, but so many things are happening in my life that this hobby got put on a backburner. Long holiday+ crappy shift schedule +my computer broke so i had no way of typing up my stories- i'm not about to use my workplace desktop to type erotic stories... That would be awkward to explain.

So all in all i havent been very busy with the lorrea storyline- but today i wrote a full page! Yay! So that is 15 google doc pages so far which prob translates to literotica 2 pages.

Fingers crossed that i get off my lazy ass and by a new laptop, because typing on my phone is just tiring.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
nice

really nice story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

you are marevellous

long_legs2ulong_legs2uover 8 years agoAuthor
ALRIGHT ALREADY!!!

Next chapter has been submitted!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Love your story XD

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
loved it

Great read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

really fine work

Horseman68Horseman68about 4 years ago
Beautiful Writing.

Enough said.

reddeR_knows_betterreddeR_knows_betterover 1 year ago

Holy shit that was hot! Bravo! Just brilliant writing!

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