All Comments on 'The Last Reflexive Ch. 10'

MC, I am of the opinion, that you are posting this story in too many chapters.

Of course that means a longer wait for the rest of your story. I think that some of the compelling dramatics and whacky humor are being lost divided like this.

Like eating Surströmming, you need to gulp it down and follow with a shot of Akvavit or Explorer. Your breathlessly reckless prose needs a wide canvas.

Do not let the whiny little analmousies discourage you with getting on your crazy in creativity.