All Comments on 'The Last Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

This is an excellent story. Thanks for writing it.

shandalshandalover 13 years ago
ahhh.....a fairy story

BDSM in reverse .....sweet take.......

LunanoireLunanoireover 13 years ago
Nicely done

I always like clever!

LadyPartsLadyPartsover 13 years ago
Cute story

Nice play on slave/master relationship. Well done!

ElanorElanorover 13 years ago
Clever!!

Clever story with a good twist to it. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Beautiful!

I rarely give five stars but you earned them, sir. Easily the most human story I can remember reading here. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
sweet

White hat special! I do so love melodrama.

chaser73065chaser73065over 11 years ago
Enjoyable

I enjoyed this story I'm sure its not to everyones taste and normally one like this wouldn't catch my attention but something about this one did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Cinderella is actually the princess.......saved by the knight in tarnished armour with a dingy basement.

An inventive tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good one.

Don't usually like Bdsm but I get linked to one once-in-awhile that I enjoy. This story was one of them. Well played.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Not many stories worth enjoying multiple times

This is one that deserves re-reads. Mostly light-hearted, with a serious origin. Love the dry humor dialogue. The actions are uncomplicated but interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Story

What a great story,really about love,of a special kind.And a change from the so often mysandric/misogynistic tales told on Literotica,though this story is close to the wind,

fortunately no mindless humiliation and beatings.

Keep writing

49greg49gregover 4 years ago
Really good

Good story, great ending.

SubmissiveCelesteSubmissiveCelestealmost 2 years ago

Nice twist and well written. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I thought it was great! Twists and turns, and all's well.

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