All Comments on 'The Lawn Boy Ch. 02'

by luvjuice43

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luvjuice43luvjuice43about 8 years agoAuthor
Those who can do, those who cannot become critics

Everytime I have received positive comments they always come from other writers, but when I received negative comments they always come from those who have not posted any of their writings. Funny how that works.

Impo_65Impo_65over 5 years ago
Thank you

To the author,

Thank you for the story as well as standing up to the bullying trolls who post all the negative comments. All authors here should do so.

albert1eralbert1erabout 3 years ago
Excellent story

Very horny and well written.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

Luv, I doubt any writer, other than other cuckold bitches, have ever praised your writing.

daganetdaganetover 1 year ago

Why shorten dialogues and story? Who is promoting this idea? As for me, dialogues are the juiciest part of any story. Especially if the writer is good, and you are good, I want the story not to end at all. Please give free rein to your talent, let it run wild with all its might! Good luck to you in your work.

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