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Another that just wasn't right to me. I'm sorry. It is psychological spousal abuse and not sexual fantasy. It will appeal to many and was written well. It had the correct elements and flow with a start, middle and catchy ending. It had an ending that you never saw coming. And it had an ending that I wanted them to have some serious illness or accident to come to them with him receiving everything. The only ending I would accept.

Going good until the boy got the zip ties out, then it went straight down hill when the wife came home and announced she'd been fucking the boy. I love BBC stories, even ones where stuff like this happens, on occasion, but I feel like I was "tricked" into this one! It was ok then it wasn't the story premise or tag line, if you will.