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Audrey07Audrey07over 7 years agoAuthor
Edit

Sorry for the typo:

"We were covered in the wine and we liked every part of each other's bodies."

Should be: "...we LICKED every part..."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Small typos can go unnoticed when the sentences flow like champagne :)

nickey40nickey40about 6 years ago
Great story. Hope the next ones are as good

I love the story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Quibbles

If you're going to capitalize the word Sunday, you should most definitely capitalize Catholic. And it's hue, not hew.

Your story is cute and sexy. I like it.

okami1061okami1061over 1 year ago

Heartless users don't make interesting characters to read about, regardless of the sex they engage in, because that sex means nothing. It's pure selfishness.

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