by ironfelix
I loved this story. Would have liked to see her spank him. Still, five stars!
I really loved the connection between Sal and Terrence. It's nice to read a lighthearted story where the characters obviously care for each other a great deal. Writing humor can be tricky, but you did an excellent job here.
This was actually one of the first here on Lit that didn't start, or end, as a stroke story. As I'm a retired librarian, it actually made me long for times gone by. 😀 Great job.
This is so good that I wish I'd written it. Exceptional character development and great story line. You are a masterful author. Of course, five stars.