All Comments on 'The Library'

I think it went too fast, though. Would love to have seen this drawn out more.

Sexy little story.

Decent story but forgettable. However, I appreciate your effort and would like to encourage you to continue writing.

Love it. Please write more.

The only negative thing that I have to say is that she walked to the library but got in her car to leave.

There were a couple details that didn't feel right to me. She walks to the library but drives home. Also, Maddie had to use a key card to get into the room did the person that nearly walked in on them not?

a nice lesbian tale done with grace and style and still hot!

There's 2 things I didn't like....the girl with "white collar face" had a skirt on at first that changed to pants somehow then she walks to the library and somehow drives home. Other than that it was good

This story did not flow together at all with the clothes. The story was a huge turn off for me. Good luck with your next story

Great story. Very hot.