All Comments on 'The Library Crawl'

wonderfully well written and narrated. I love the details of her thoughts as she is so exposed and taken. ...thinking I might need to take a trip to the library soon *grin* too bad I dont have a splendid Master like this

I was left literally speechless by the time you finished that last word.

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Amazing.

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Absolutely amazing.

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Right now, that had to probably be the best thing I've seen on this site yet.

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Your tone and sound capture was practically perfect. The sheer sound of your voice is ideal for ears.

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The <i>way</i> you read was enough to send me into a frenzy. Your description, and input, the personality, and extra "umph" <i>really</i> did the trick!

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I didn't know whether to simply bask in your sonorous voice or to lay back and desirously play along.

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That was indubitably a <b> TRUE </b> work of Literary Erotica!

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Containing both literary elements at their best and the seduction and sultry enticements of eroticism.

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And, nothing more can be said.

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Thank you.

Wonderfully written and the voice of the author, greatly enhanced by his detailed thoughts of the 'librarian', drew me to a wonderful conclusion. Very well done indeed.

Easily the best that I have come across in a long while. Great story, beautifully narrated.

Phew. A master making researches via library computer:) Hehe. I want him badly...

What a great story! I love both the story and your voice!! I'm looking forward to your other stories, and perhaps a visit to my own local library. ;)

...the theme and the delivery!

Very sexy. The visuals I could see in my mind just from the writing were lovely. 5

I enjoyed this story and as always Zenmackie brought me right into the world. I was there at the local library with Patti. Hmmm I like the idea of the anonymous sex, the stranger's cum inside her panties, she feeling obligated to obey Master's orders and being rewarded for it. Love the short, but I want more!