All Comments on 'The Lifeboat'

Quality story, I liked the Journal model that you used, would have enjoyed a little more description during, rather than struggled, how did she struggle? how did she fight back, how did he get bruised ribs. But overall I like it. More!

...better in the end. The last sentence made the fifth star for me.

This spoke to my heart in a way a story has not in a long time. I came to rouse an appetite, but it satiated another hunger. Bravo!

The ending was the best.

Very well done!

loved what was there but you left way too much on the table.

good story, could have used more details, but the ending was superb!!!

Such a fine conclusion. Thankx.

Yes,Loved it!He is kindand loving from the beginning but also wit a strong cave man instinct of procreation.

Good reading.... Enjoyed it a lot.