All Comments on 'The Lifeguard'

Wow nicely done. The lifeguard-in-the-shower fantasy is something I am always looking for as I had a big crush on my lifeguard as a teen! Glad to finally find one! And a good one at that. I don't really have any criticism since this was pretty damn good. I wish it would have been a bit more forcefull or rough/dominating as it is in the category. Can't wait to read more! Also I like the separate POV's.

-Liz

Really great story, I like that there are the two perspectives. Good balance between the rough and the sweet, I'll be reading all your stories from now on for sure!

its a good story but its not like bdsm it more rough.there was no bondage or domination.still a good read:)

Loved this. The male perspective was super hot after the lead up. Inspired me to write something.

I really liked this! Is wasnt just "fucking" it was actually really sweet and the male perspective was a very nice touch!

Very good story, can't wait for part two. How long does this relationship last?

MadE my pussy wet I never masterbatid so herd in my life my vibrator was going crazy

I loved it, the delicious need of that hot erotic tango of two strangers enjoying it but still having that initial rush. It's amazing, can't wait for more parts