All Comments on 'The Lifeguard'

I would have put this story into the "romance" category. Good read, well written, and just the right length. Keep them cumming

This is so sweet and seriously sexy. Excellent short story although I think you could amp up the BDSM element in terms of detail and lengthen the process of them getting together and it would make a wonderful multi part story. Really good.

Hot and sweet and romantic in a way, all rolled into one. I really hope this isn't finished yet though. I definitely want to see more of these two. 5 stars. ~K.

I agree; this should have been in the "romance" category, rather than the "bdsm" category. Not in the "first time" category

An x rated princess diaries. Lol

nice hot story 5 stars.