All Comments on 'The Light Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
short and sweet

Love the twist!

CuriousBBWCuriousBBWover 17 years ago
Love it!

Excellent writing, I felt like I was right there. My heart was pumping and I was aching to see her myself. Can't wait for the next story.

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