All Comments on 'The Lingerie Party Guest of Honor'

Lots of repeated paragraphs

great story but needs a little editing.NEEDS ANOTHER CHAPTER!!

Very hot story, but left you hanging for next installment as a good story will though. Can't wait for more. Everyone i recomended this story to loved it even with the repeted paragraphs. KEEP IT COMING!!

The story has been fixed. My Thanks to the folks at Literotica for working with me to fix the problems.

With a mother like that, there's no way she'll stay married to anyone.

Serious though, if she wants her husband to make love to her,rather than his hand,she needs to make him feel wanted by her words and actions. If you treat men as toys you can pick up and switch on and off at will, be sure that's how they will treat you too.

Hey, loved the story. I so wish this was real! Would love to hear if you post more. Kept my arosed from start to finish. Thanks again. Si

lovely story very feminine just as it should be!

Sick shit! The guy had a slip fetish,but he got off watching Wifey,not Faggy or Sissy. AND what a piece of shit wife to set him up for that kind of humiliation and disrespect. Add a few more paragraphs at the end where he gets home,smacks the bitch around (Along with her CUNT mother),pisses all over her face,and strangles her with a half-slip!

I think she gave her husband exactly what he wanted. He just did not know it yet. He likes this portion of their marriage. She must get over the jelousy. You cannot own him. He wants what you are offering, just take it and run with it. More of this story!!!

If you can't trust your wife you divorce her. And this bitch is definetely NOT trustworthy. Divorce her.

Not quite what I hoped it would be. But hot!