by blin18
Another excellent story. Very evocative, and you've yet again portrayed people with a depth that is often lacking from other stories.
Great effort.
I am very impressed with the quality of the writing and the intelligent subject matter. Imagine a loving couple that communicates and enjoys sex... with each other! Very well done!
Excellent, it's so good to read something with a different tilt.
Good grammar and punctuation.
Intelligent writing and teasingly erotic.
I've never before written my reaction to a story, but yours screamed out for a big BRAVO!!! And, if this were read or portrayed in a Carnegie Hall type of venue, you would now be holding a large bouquet of beautiful long stem roses. Can you feel my admiration? I have also taken note of your "pen name" on Literotica.com. I will look for another presentation by you.
I've read several of your stories and liked them all, but this one was by far the best. Your originality, use of humor and the extreme eroticism make your stories stand out as far and away the best on this site (or Lush). How anyone can give this less than a '5' is simply incomprehensible. Thank you for all your writing!
Wow that was hot and you sure know how to keep the tension until the end.
Great story
For living my dream scenario. I was excited through the whole story. Got anymore?
more importantly, lack of respect for the wife. Bod could have, should have, torn her panty's gusset then fucked the shit out of her. Would have served them both right. And if they continue it will happen one day. But I have a feeling she will welcome it, as will Geof. Then the cuck and whore will be out of the closet.
Silly juvenile plot, entertaining to a 14 year old mentality. Congratulations.
Very well done, blin18 -- this was so well-written and incredibly HOT! Thank you, more like it please, and have big shining stars; if I could give you ten, I would!
My grandfather was a perfectionist, and as a young child he would share a bit of wisdom with me when I became flustered while performing some task:
He would say, "good, better, best, never let it rest, till the 'good' is 'better' and the 'better' is 'best!"
He would have been proud of your writing, it is the 'best.'
5 stars isn't good enough, your story is all the 'good' plus the 'better' and the very 'best.'
It's not easy to write a tease story like this and maintain the buildup of tension. Good work.
I've also not commented before but was driven to by the beautiful eroticism of this story. Great stuff. I'll be taking a much closer look at some of my fellow passengers on the train from Wynyard in future ;-)
Welllllll
Fkn awesome. I find it hard to believe you can write this well being as young as you are. I think we'll see you make it as a real author (published-paid) in the future. I can see why all your stories have the "H" symbol.
Using words like "intercrural" or "wont" shows a huge vocab, well past anything else I've seen in this site in the last 10 years.
Now I have to go read some of your other stories....and please write some more like this :-)
Your creativity knows no bounds.
Which railway line do you infest? I do hope you're not one of those stuck-up North Shore types.
You know this already, but you have an ability to convince your reader that the characters, particularly you, are real. None of the usual grammar or spell check faults either. Pleasure to read, not to mention the eroticism which is enough to turn on a saint. Thanks
GrandPa needs to run on back home and have a 'chat' with GrandMa!
...and try not to be jealous of Geoff too... :-)
I enjoyed your story very much, Very much indeed. I cant help but think that you are a very sexy woman, Your writing is sexy as hell. Thank you
My wife and I loved your story. Now we're going to bed.
Great story.
this reminds me of a real life escapade a girlfriend and I were on. Oh, the memories. That story may be told someday, but that's about 30th on my list.
Great story. I anticipate more!
Can't believe I didn't notice this one was up for almost a week. I have to check my email settings, make sure I'm still getting my updates. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
As ever, the sex scenes are well written and fun, but I always enjoy your character interplay in a completely separate way. In this case, it's unique dynamic between Geoff and Angie that catches my attention. I don't know too many guys that would get *that* turned on by watching their girl tease other men, even fewer women that would be willing to stay loyal when they can obviously hook just about any fish that swims past. The fact that these two are not only those kinds of people, but also made it an integral part of their somewhat ravenous sex lives, is an interesting peek into the mindset. For me, I guess I like the idea of being able to trust somebody that deeply.
Nicely done!
This was a great story! I felt like a fly on the wall.
I can't believe I'm just now reading your story but life intervened (hate it when that happens). I'm definitely glad I read it now. It showcases your ability to take a situation, put your own spin on it and turn it into a fun, hot, sexy romp.
Another well done story.
Your stories just keep getting better. You're one of my favorite authors on this site. I think you'll have a brilliant literary career. Intelligent dialogue, well-crafted, and vividly expressed. Excellent!
I have read hundreds of stories. ..but this one just blew my head offf...
Wont forget it for a long time...
I like romantic stories about couples. "Cheating" stories are not my thing, but this really surprised me! Right up to the edge, unplanned, and simply exciting. Thank you!
I almost felt I was also in the shop watching all this happening.
Beautiful,I wish I had a wife like you
One of those stories that you can't stop reading but can't bear to finish.
Sorry but, my daughters an escort/courtesan, and its $5000 a night. WTF would you get for 500, eewwwww. BUT.... LOOOOVED the story 😉
Seeing as how the old cookies were gone I could vote again. Still one of the best stories I've ever read here.
I noticed you haven't written here for a while.... :-(
Would it help if I got on my knees and begged?
We have an anonymouse mental health expert here to help us all with our "disease"
That just warms the cockles of my perverted heart!
But....dear anon expert.....just a warning.....don't start reading the stories. They are hopelessly addicting and soon, you too will be whacking off in some dark hole in the wall, hoping nobody catches you....
Public health warning**** It's contagious!
If our anonymouse mental health expert drops advice like this on one of Blin's stories, imagine the advice that would be given on stories by some of the more aggressive authors.
Lue
Ps: Blin has advised that she has now gone commercial, but there may be another Literotica contribution in the not-too-distant future.
So that's why the panties I bought my girl were such a mess... I did get them for half off the regular price though. A well written delightful little story...something different for a change!
I was on the edge of my seat the entire time while bob was involved fearing that it would take a turn in a bad direction. Was great to see a story with a husband and wife teasing each other and a stranger without it going to far or out of control and the open communication between them was really sweet. That's something severely lacking in this genre. Truly lived up to the name Loving Wives rather than the usual cheating wives.
Well written story, but not the erotic.masterpiece you people seem to think.
WOW! Wonderful story. What a nice twist to it all. It was very erotic. The eroticism was enhanced by the level of restraint the writer showed. I don't want to give the story away. It's one of the best I have read on this site. My wife will love it!
Makes me want to be a secret shopper at fredricks of Hollywood and/or Victoria’s Secret