All Comments on 'The Lion's Den'

I really enjoyed your use of adjectives. The words you use made the action come alive. You really have a gift ... I even learned a couple new words, which thrills me to death. :)

Hopefully this is just part one. I was a bit confused as to the relationship between Tom and Brayden. (Maybe I missed something) When on the dance floor, Brayden quickly left Sarah when Tom arrived as if he was afraid, but obviously he wasn't, which the reader later learns.

I've just read the series of Sarah as far as it is up to date and I just had to leave a comment. It's beautifully written, really lovely to read, the flow was good, the settings were good, your description of all the events were exciting and made me hold my breath (especially the last chapter phew!). Imagining myself in Sarahs position, DAMN it got me really hot and bothered, I followed everything that Brayden did to Sarah through the whole thing. I hope you update with more! Thank you for writing this!!