All Comments on 'The Little Green Dress'

Apart from the one implied incident of Luke's mother giving him head, there was no actual incest depicted, but a lot of Bruce having sex with Luke's girlfriends and mother, so perhaps this is more suited to the 'Erotic Encounter's' or maybe 'Loving Wives' categories. Good story though, nicely devious plotting, and Bruce got the pay-off, so no nastiness and bitterness like the LW category seems to demand these days. I enjoyed it a lot, and expect to see much more from this author in the future. One slight criticism; using contractions ("I'm" instead of "I am", "I'd" instead of "I would" and so on) will make your dialogue sound a little less formal and stilted - in real life, people are seldom that formal when they speak. I enjoyed the story, 5 well-earned stars.