by lesliejones
Your writing is tight and the story flows well. I'd be interested in seeing two things here, one is the mother being required to serve a role or purpose similar to one who mows the lawn, but perhaps performing sexual servicing of a neighbor daily at an early hour. The other is to see the flip flop of control for Karen as she is put in a situation where she must submit to a group of people in front of her mother.
I join others,in asking you to continue with her mothers humiliation.
Loved the way she was asked to spread her pussy lips so all her shame was on show...