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All Comments on 'The Little Mermaid'

by TamLin01

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Cthulhu and the Little Mermaid ?

mixing the Little Mermaid story with Lovecraft's Cthulhu mythos ? ? ?

subtlekisssubtlekissalmost 6 years ago

Story with a twist, a little sad. I would have liked to see Tristam and Lorelai have a deeper relationship. I liked the way you used language though :)

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPennyalmost 6 years ago

Beautifully, wonderfully imaginative! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Your stories are the god damn best, incredibly underrated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sublimely spooky seaside story.

Dreamy writing and a really unusual take on the Nude day theme. 5/5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Always nice when everyone does not die at the end

5 stars Lovecraft horror is my favorite

Cerberus_ficwriterCerberus_ficwriterabout 5 years ago
Very good

I really enjoyed this story 👍

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I never expected to find such a beautiful, well-written story on this website! You're very talented. This fairytale was a delight to read, although I'm a bit sad that Lorelei had to go back to the sea in the end.

roy_rroy_rover 2 years ago

I loved the creepy and fairy-tale-like atmosphere.

Pops4Pops4over 2 years ago

Truly beautiful and inspired writing. You are Blessed🎄

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