All Comments on 'The Live-in Ch. 03'

this is one the grate stories on hear at the moment .It has a good mixes of good family incest and nowe gangbang to T Y yours lenn5red xxxx

When you started the series, you indicated you did not think the later chapters turned out as well as the first. I am happy to report that you were mistaken. They are just as good and I especially like the way you let the characters express their inner thoughts, concerns and conflicts. I also like they way some scenes are very scripted out and others allow us to imagine how the scene played out.

Is there any more? Turned into a very nice read. Hope you write some more. Ana needs to experience the dungeon. Will she domme the men, also or remain submissive?

This has been a good story series up to this point (even though I don't care for male bi), but it does cry out for more chapters as soon as possible. Just do not rush to bring it to a conclusion (especially do not rush the conclusion of the story's journey).

In this chapter, I came across one big problem. In the ninth paragraph from the end you switched pronouns -- 'her' for 'his' and later the reverse: "...David pulled out of her, and his son took her place. Daniel slipped in as easily as her father had."; "She took it in his mouth..." A good proofreading should have caught this as it disrupted the flow of the passage. Otherwise, this was very good as they obviously respected her boundaries. So, I hope we will see more of this story.

It's a good series up to this point. With so many people involved right now, it's a little difficult to keep track of everyone. The challenge now is going to come up with a new scenario that Ana hasn't already experienced! Can't wait until the next chapter.

5****** s This is becoming one of my favored series . Thanks for the good read .

Thanks again

TX Cracker

I seriously hope you will be continuing this series! Too hot!

Please more! One of my favorite series!

the story ended. what a great read. 5 stars. wish there was more

This was a great story - it could go on much, much longer. Please write more!

This whole concept makes me so wet, and I desperately want more! I've never cum so many times reading one story

The author has written a truly enjoyable, logically constructedincest love story. Hope he/she will continue writting.