All Comments on 'The Loft Game: Kermit'

Super enjoyable story! I'll borrow some of your "definitelys" before you return them to Costco and say I definitely can't wait for the next one ;)

Goddamn, that was an incredibly hot story. Very well written, very well told. It drew me in & held my interest ...and I know that I'll be looking forward to hearing more about Chips & Co.!

This one goes in my favorites!

Any story as well written as this one deserves five stars, but when you add a game that raises the tension in the players (and the reader) so smoothly all the way through - well five are just not enough.

This episode is an excellent start to what I hope will be a long and fruitful series.

Thank you. 5*

Enjoyable, well-written story. Thanks for sharing, Mr. Chasten!

Great build up, great approach. They all felt like real people doing the kinds of things real people do when they're that age.

Liked it the first time I read it and like it now too. Not sure what's up with Nora. Those are really good words you use. I use them a lot too -- same result. Ready for more games in the loft.

Very entertaining, and held my interest in the first AND second read.

Just another thing I missed going to school later. Oh well, at least I got to participate vicariously now. Thanks!

Axelotto

I loved the slow build even though we knew she’d be getting naked. It heightened the mood. Well done!

Can’t wait to read the next installment to include everybody’s favorite purple dinosaur!

Excellent story!!!

Great story, well told and with just the right amount of erotism.

5 stars.

Lovely story. I am looking forward to reading how things develop :-)

Thank you.

What a pleasure to find someone who can really write. Pie Thief was a superior story, and this series is really fun. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff on here. Keep up the good work!

If you like this as much as I did, you might like, M club by Watching cloud. I would tell you about it but rule one applies. Watching cloud can put some word together as well as Chasten.

Thanks a good read

Loved it. This was my second read in order to refresh for the new chapter. I don’t know why I rated the first read as average. Second read gets a five. This is typically what college kids do. Nothing too serious but boundary stretching. Quite funny. Thanks.

Great story, great pacing. Loved how much unnecessary bloat was skipped and only necessary bits remained. Cant wait to read other stories! Was a long time since I read something this good.

Good story. Did anyone get the Music Man reference?

My second time reading this, and it was even better than I remembered it being. Thank you for your time and effort. KS