All Comments on 'The Lone Diner'

This was a nice light, enjoyable read. Well crafted with a delightful twist.

Every once in awhile you read a story here where 5 stars hardly seems representative of the effort, and this is one of those stories. The excellent writing style, the ease at which the dialogue and character development flowed, and the passion in the love making were all in great supply. Would have given it 10 stars if I could have, ok, maybe 9, as nobody should drink red wine with fish!

Thank you. It’s nice to read anything written by someone so skilled. This piece is extraordinary. You set the bar high. Time to deduct 2 points from most every other submitted story.

This is a truly worthy of 5 stars.

THIS WAS THE CATS MEOW. I LOVED IT! I WISH ALL STORIES WERE THIS GOOD. FOR SOME REASON I NOW FEEL AS I JUST LOST MY LIFETIME BEST FRIEND. THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFUL STORY!

You impressed me so much that I'm going to read everything you've written.

Very well written. No a bam bam sex only story...

A real plot line and sexy as hell. Loved it!

Hopefully another chapter....meeting up with Melissa? Hard from start to finish!

Outstanding! It’s not often you get a well written, erotic yet sweet and loving story....this does it.

The story a bit all over the place

You need another chapter at least to resolve everything !!!

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Mary was being hunted to be killed ! Then no mention of it again!?

is her dad not her dad

not gonna fuck him next line fuck me!?

With a nice twist.

Anon - your questions were answered near the end.

Although I think the phone call and meeting with Melissa could have gone to ch 2. Ch 3 would be mother and daughter with Green, plus the big reveal of who daddy actually is.

Well written and deep characterization. Wonderful details, too. Your story had humor as well as poignant internal musings and conflict. Keep it up!

It was pretty evident to me that his Love from College (brings back memmories) Mellisa and his present obsession Mary, were related in some way. Well. Of course listed under the category "Incest", became a no brainer. J B U have a talent, don't waste it, keep us who appreciate Literotica appreciate U, and need more of Ur writing style.

What else to add... Good work..

The writing was very good. The story was intriguing. Mark was a rock star!

I agree with Michelle that red wine with the fish was gauche! But a very nice story. Five stars, JB. More to come! (You know what I mean.)

Fantastic read JB, I wonder did he knock Mary up? Is he really her father?

maybe...ding, ding, ding...automatic dump and a BIG 1 star

The storyline was very intriguing, but it lacked closure. Since the author is still writing on Lit it would be nice if he continued the story to a conclusion. 5/5

Snappy writing and a convoluted but coherent plot make for a great read. I thought this story was complete as written. 5*

Very erotic. Very well written. Absorbing characters and story line. It's a big 5 stars from me.