All Comments on 'The Lone Wolf Ch. 01'

Please continue your story.

Great start, but please, please don't be like many new writers on here and drop of the face of the earth after 1 chapter.

Good start but try to be consistent in the tense of your writing. Flicking between past tense and present tense is off-putting for the reader.

Great premise. Interesting characters. Please share more. Thanks

It's really a good start. Good story line. But, I agree with Snowsage. Changing from past to present tense tends to throw people off. Try not to use past tense words especially while you are giving descriptions. It's kinda like okay if that's what he did look like does he still fit that description? Get what I mean? Other than that great job! Can't wait to read more.

Yes the tense caused me some ....tension, but I loved the story.

5*

Nice description of the emotions each character is feeling. Looking forward to reading the other parts! Keep up the good work!

It is not just the past and present being mixed up - there is also future used when conditional would be better.

I find past tense working better than present.

The description of how not shifting before full moon affects, doesn't feel quite fitting.