All Comments on 'The Lone Wolf Ch. 02'

One page chapters are killing me but the story is really good so far

I'm really enjoying this story, it is coming from an unusual but fun angle!

Please keep adding to it, (I would not mind a full length novel ;-) )

Its great....would it b possible to make them longer though

Good job with the second chapter. I love the fact that you detailed the shift change and added their emotions during that change. The only complaint is how short it is. I'd like to see longer chapters :)

Isn't it supposed to be ...Nola left the village...instead of...Nola leaves the village..

You really need to fix the tense, it doesn't feel right even though I'm not a native english speaker. But I still loved the story 5*